elreybon's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Green Knight]

Amazing! You got the humor down pat. Any chance there will be more of these? This would make a brilliant webseries!

squeakytoad responds:

Thanks! As I said to another reviewer, I actually wrote several scenes back when I made this. Now that I have time to animate for fun again, I might produce them, if there's enough demand for it.

[Snow Hare]

Beautiful!

ShawnBranden responds:

Thank you! :)

[Frog catching fly with to]

I love the animation style, and the joke at the end was simple yet funny! Personally I could do without the thought and speech bubbles especially since the frog talks (show it don't say it). Examples: instead of saying "Hungry" you could have the frog's stomach rumble; and have the frog ignore the mosquito (which may be confusing at first because the frog is hungry, but when lots of mosquitoes come and the frog is happy I think it will be clear what he is waiting on). All and all good job, I look forward to more from you!

sheshu responds:

o.k Thank you :)

[WtN Ep1: Exeggutor!]

Great Job! I had no idea what was happening at the beginning and thought maybe there was some kind of reference I was missing, but when it turned out to be a bad trip.... *applause*. Can't wait for the next episode!

allcreator responds:

Thank you! I was actually wrestling with the idea to make the opening that confusing. I thought perhaps people would find it boring and not wait as long for the "punch line" I'm glad you liked it :D

[Girls In Distress Opening]

Nice Job! Great anime opening, especially if you don't quite have a firm grasp on Flash yet. The only big thing that bothered me was the art style, but I totally bought into it when hair started blowing at six seconds. At that point I said out loud "Nice. Okay, I can deal with it."
A couple of small things:
First, when the three large stripes of colors come with the flashing portraits, I think it would be better if the portraits get a little more screen time. Since they are all white outlines it's hard to tell them apart, and they come and go so fast that by the last time it happened I didn't even try to see the faces.
Second, the gun shot to the head. I don't know why it bothered me, but I felt like you were blowing your load prematurely so to speak. It would be like if the opening to the first episode of Trigun showed Vash with his giant gun arm shooting the moon. Maybe have her fire and have the guy watching the bullet come towards his head, bullet time style, and then cut right before it hits? Maybe I'm crazy...

Anyway, I enjoyed it and am looking forward to actual episodes.!

283inuyasha responds:

Can you be specific what you mean when you said the "art style" bothered you so I can look into it to improve ;D Ah, Okay, I understand, So they flashed a bit to quickly for the eye to pick up details when it comes to the portraits?
So , er with the gun, Have her shoot, and have the bullet come towards him but not actually showing the hit because it's a little bit to much ? Other than those things you've pointed out to me everything was okay? Thanks for your feedback! ;D